Many people believe money is a very important consideration when choosing a job as it can help you get a better lifestyle; however, there are some who believe it is more important to have a job you enjoy and that this, and not money, will lead to greater happiness and a more balanced personal life.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is not easy to choose a job. Some people believe that money should be considered as a very important factor when choosing a job because it can help you to get a better lifestyle. However, some believe that it is more important to choose a job you enjoy and this will lead to a greater happiness and a more balanced personal life. This essay will discuss both of the viewpoints and give my own opinion.
Money should be considered as one of the most important factor when choosing a job. Firstly, a well-paid job support for your livings. It helps you to satisfy your needs and have better living...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...not just a waste of time but your money also. In my opinion, to have a happy and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37234042553 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33508147668 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418439716312 0.561755894193 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5567546963 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.8947368421 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8421052632 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.630566205366 0.244688304435 258% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212505593006 0.084324248473 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17313019193 0.0667982634062 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.430254613619 0.151304729494 284% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141793304328 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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