What do you think the main considerations when deciding what job to take should be?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples.
Nowadays, most people choose a job, which can help them gain a lot of money. However, there are still people do not agree with this opinion. In this essay, I will discuss about this and give my own opinion.
There are some reasons why people only choose a job, which helps them gain money. Firstly, money is necessary for their lives. Everybody knows that we need money to have good living conditions. Therefore, it is easy to understand why these people prefer a job, which helps them earn a lot of money. Secondly, a well-paid job will help you to make your life easier. There is no need to think or scare of starving and poor. Therefore, you can enjoy your life.
However, money is not the only thing that should be considered when choosing a job. Firstly, you should choose a job that you love. You will sooner or later find that doing a job that you do not love is very boring. You cannot find your enthusiasm and do your best. Secondly, your ability is also an important factor when you choose your future job. You should think carefully about your strengths and weaknesses. Then choose a job that can help you to make use of your strengths and restrict your weaknesses.
In conclusion, people have their own thinking and choice about choosing a job. However, I think that to have a happy and balanced life, you should have a job that you enjoy but also help you to earn enough money for your livings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52140077821 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23342914059 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463035019455 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1049873095 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.1578947368 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5263157895 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253709929854 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967446818834 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603944869781 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157227791175 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861762993778 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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