Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When the scientific issues come into views, there exist controversial opinions. Some individuals believe that scientific programs should be funded and monitored by the governments, while others hold the notion that private organizations can lead to the success of these studies. In my opinion, both governments and private institutions have their own strength and weakness in carrying out scientific researches. The writing below will discuss these opinions.
First of all, the scientific programs contain various problems and threats. Specifically, these researches belong to the new area of scientific studies; therefore, they are strange, undirected and require abundance of financial supports. As a result, researching can cause a plenty of struggles or issues that can lead to the bankruptcy of companies. Meanwhile, with a large number of human resources as well as budgets, the government can avoid risks and find it simple to carry out the researches.
On the other hand, these scientific studies are time-consuming. In consequence, the government may neglect it because they have various works to focus on such as monitoring the country or making relationship with other nations. Meanwhile, private companies can spend a plenty of time on studying and researching new things. These organizations will utilize their resources and maximize the results if they find excitement and profits.
In my opinion, both governments and private companies have their own perks as well as weakness while carrying out new researches. Therefore, they should consider and choose the suitable subjects in order to achieve success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63157894737 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04694538012 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550607287449 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5412261421 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199793759897 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665426151745 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531674948695 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129601700699 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394312541283 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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