Many people believe that social media networking sites such as facebook have had are huge negative impact on individual and society.
to what extend do you agree?
Off people people people
Technologies has placed us with many things in which social networking is one of them it is a common belief by majority of people bet Facebook is playing significant role investing time and kills once ability. I believe there are many disadvantages of Facebook and other social media platforms on individual as well as society.
Firstly, no doubt globalisation has made everything possible for us and these technologies are highest manifestation of it everyone is using social media and everyone is connected in any means with it many psychologists believe that social media suggest Facebook is addiction which is creating huge embarrassment in once personality it is the addiction same is that of cigarette and alcohol because when someone consumes drugs there generates one chemical in brain called dopamine and when a person uses Facebook and access the same chemical releases which makes an individual addicted.
Secondly, social media consumes a lot of time when an individual is started using it the Facebook is starts work on an algorithm and bombard things any suggestions which is liked by an individual and through this the unlimited loop of using Facebook keeps going.
Thirdly, social media and Facebook people post only good things in their lives such as their lifestyle their vacations shopping’s and food which creates sadness in others less privileged person and these posts put him in doldrums, so it is not wrong to say that it is the tool of anxiety and depression fully stop.
Fourthly, there are a number of negative impacts of social media on society as well. Through social media anyone can target anyone one can bully others cyber crime which is now based on peak besides leak video can easily be viral through Face book which left huge negative impact on society. Moreover, hackers always there to do you hack system. Many incidents can be promoted through media such as Arab Spring which is one of the incidents which destroyed the governments. Finally, it could be said that in 21st century the media games are so short where everyone is there to kill the ability and make any society good or bad.
To conclude, Although there are many social media benefits in our lives, it is very difficult for anyone to take full advantage from it because it is a tool of destruction and hinders once capacity.
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| 2021-05-28 | Faisal Gaffar | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63469290882 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510101010101 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.939006785 49.4020404114 283% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.0 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301949884862 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127003730397 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065536651281 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139445368875 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518942124541 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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