Due to the advancement in technology children are adopting anti-social habbits. Apparently, it have horrowing upshot on society. However, there also have some solutions to solve this problem.
The most predominent reason of this disrespectful behaviour is telecasting caime related programs on television. To be more precise, it is widely acknowledged that in today's era children spend their most of time on TV programs like movies, serials,and so on. Whereas it put negetive impact on their brain. As a reasult they behave as TV program characters in their real life. Hence, they start disrespecting of their elders. To solve this problem parents should check what is watched by their children on TV. Apart from this, government should band some crime programs which helps to brightes the countrys' future.
Moving further, social media is also perhaps one of the grave reason behind this disrespectfull attitude in today's youngsters. According to a survey conducted by the USA univercity that 80% students spend their huge time on social media applications and messages. However, these days parents have very hectic schedule. They do not have sufficient time to watch on their childrens' activities. Because of this children start doing disobey their elders. To solve this issue parents should spend some quality time with their child ,and they have to do some outdoor activities with them. So they can socialize with others. Not only this ,but also it helps to improve thair communication skills and brings politeness in their behaviour. Moreover, government and school authorities should create some competitions and also give some prizes to encourage students.
To conclude, if parents and higher authorities should do hand-to-hand approach ,then this problem can be solved. If not then it may become the main cause in countries down economy.
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- Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti social behaviour and lack of respect for others What might have caused this situarion How to improve it 61
- Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people say that every human being can create art for example painting Others think only the people born with the ability can create art discuss both view and give your opinion 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3595890411 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79471149965 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7052718647 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5238095238 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134570658465 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442193846391 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305543553116 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878280029745 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356455527939 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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