Many people believe that today there is a General increase in Anti Social behaviour and lack of respect for others. what might have caused this situation?how to improve it?
it is not strange to hear the gutter presses wrote about the not accepted younger’s behaviors as well as in tone when interacting with older. this hassle is increasing gradually, making it warming to developing society. We will examine some reasons that have caused it and how to reduce its effects.
First of all, I think that they have watched too many negative programs on tv and play virtual games, these contents affect adversely their character. Really, it is easily seen that in the recent days, they have fairly leisure, consequently to occupy the free time He or she often turn on the tv and lose the track of time. Nevertheless, this is content which they have enjoyed often is violence, it has extremely scene. The parents should limit the contents which they are allowed, choose something is good, fun and suitable for him or her.
Besides, the younger is lack support, attention from their family. it is clear that numerous people now are busy working hard for a living and forget to take care of their children. Simply, they think that they only need earn a great deal, their youth is nice, it is wrong. they should devote time to stay with the adolescent to look after him or her both physicality and emotion. interacting with them to relate to what they appeal to have teaching method.
Generally speaking, the parents play an active role in the maturity of kids, should create a good environment for them, keep them always active.
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- Many people believe that today there is a General increase in Anti Social behaviour and lack of respect for others what might have caused this situation how to improve it 61
- Many people think that home cooked food is healthy but many people still prefer eating out Why is this so 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'turns'.
Suggestion: turns
...to occupy the free time He or she often turn on the tv and lose the track of time. N...
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: They
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Suggestion: Interacting
...im or her both physicality and emotion. interacting with them to relate to what they appeal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, look, nevertheless, really, so, well, i think, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78968253968 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41048810096 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2475630931 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8461538462 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132392859683 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463667951855 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337900885237 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073675977421 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196228314455 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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