Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree. What other factors can contribute to a good career?
Education is extremely pivotol in every person life, in the present era it is difficult to survive without it. After completing secondary education most of the pupils say University cources are important for a good career. I completely agree with this statement along with there are few other factors which help to contribute towards a good future, I will discuss my view points in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, in school classes students only get a particular knowledge about their field but at University level they learn in a depth related to streams. In college good teachers and study of only one field directly increase knowledge of a person by which they effortlessly get a satisfactory job after completion. To cite an epitome, jobs such as account, teacher, engineer require University certificates to apply for a job without it, it is hard to get job in big companies. Therefore University education is necessary in the new millennium.
Besides this, work experience, honestly and many more also play a important role for a good career. To elaborate, if person is not aware about how to perform work then it is difficult to do activity. Information about particular field easily help to setup own business at any where. To cite an epitome, work like mechanics, electricians and many other in these jobs it only require physical work experience not university education with this individual open their own shops and earn lot of profit.
In conclusion, in the modern era, education is getting first priority without it no one can survive. So that is why with education other factors are also important.
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- May peole believe that a university education is necessary for a good career Do you agree or disagree What other factors can contribute to a good career 61
- many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career do you agree or dis agree what other factors can contribute to a good career 61
- Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career Do you agree or disagree What other factors can contribute to a good career 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, honestly, if, second, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02592592593 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85384490241 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3098471474 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263104310334 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092010070106 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737327901683 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154839779481 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583752452449 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.