Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
Some people think that besides specific courses, it should be mandatory to study full range of subjects for all students . Personally I disagree with this statement and I believe that it is the step in the wrong direction social and educational perspectives.
From the social perspective, attending students for learning all subjects would cost as a frugal and wasting of the budget. Because, in order to teach full range of subjects, universities should embody too many skilled staff and it requires the vast amount of money. Apart from that, supplying teachers with sufficient salary and providing the adequate conditions for teaching such as rooms, equipments , mod-cons demand exorbitantly high expenditure. Actually , this method's efficacy is arguable and uncertain. Therefore , pumping the fiscal into carrying out such kind of suspicious action is truly splurging of money.
In terms of education, spurring students to study all subjects would be misguided decision. Because it might have detrimental effects on students. For example, it might abate the study progress and waste students productivity by making them overwhelmed to complete tasks. Secondly, as being overloaded with information , brain would become stressed, consequently, brain might become faltered in managing tasks efficiently.
In conclusion, encouraging students to learn flurry of subjects is twofold disadvantageous and might led unprecedented fallout in the study progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73148148148 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05901094502 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662037037037 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1658986094 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286093901809 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925056168721 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909964453919 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180044179673 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10975517807 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.