This materialistic era posing a threat to people in several ways by creating alterations in lifestyle. It is stated that a lot of individuals purchase things which actually not essential and replacement of old products with new ones also done by them. Several factors are causing these circumstances and I consider this trend will negatively affect the people. Discussion will be done about these points in upcoming paragraphs prior to reaching to conclusion.
It can be seen that purchasing products unnecessarily has become a common phenomena among people due to being influenced by several ongoing trends. The main factor behind this is that impacts of advertisements on individuals forcing them to buy things which offering attractiveness and affordability. For example, in India, youngsters have been targeted by branded companies because these firms feel eased in it as young ones impressed rapidly through advertisements. The another reason behind this is that luxurious lifestyle paving the ways for buying products without any need owing to the excessive money people have. Hence, it is enough to prove that why more and more individuals indulging in materialism.
The spreading trend of purchasing things without needing them in reality seemed very worrysome as plausible outcomes can not be expected. The important negative would be that spending money lavishly on unwanted things not going to be examplary for children because similar steps will also be followed by toddlers as their parents. For instance, in America, people proved inferior examples for their young ones due to the unessential expenditure on products and the value of money has become nothing for youngsters in this particular country. Therefore, spending income on unnecessary things will end up in a negative manner if it will practise in the same way.
In conclusion, after the analyzation of some key points about unwanted spending I personally feel that there are numerous contributing factors that compelling the people to do these practices. However, individuals have to control themselves before feeling desperation for the sake of their growing children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: phenomenon
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Suggestion:
...ividuals indulging in materialism. The spreading trend of purchasing things...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a negative manner" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ncome on unnecessary things will end up in a negative manner if it will practise in the same way. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46407185629 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98238611079 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9322819883 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205860306347 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631143268115 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517982512034 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116975138653 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029001990226 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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