Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
It is true that some people know from an early age what career they want to pursue, and they are happy to spend the rest of their life to accomplish that goal. While this is true to some extent, I personally believe that there are the others who enjoying changing careers or seeking for job satisfaction in different ways.
On the one hand, having a defined career path can certainly lead to a joyful working life. Nowadays, almost parent guide their children from the young age to decide which jobs they want to do as adults and it gives them a great determination to work toward their goals and gradually accomplish them in the future. For example, a huge number of teenagers dream of becoming game developer, but to realize this ambition they need to invest a lot of time and effort to have a vast knowledge ranging from having expertise in computer programing languages such as C or C++ to manipulate 3d graphics competently. In my experience, there are very few successful game developer choosing to change their professions because of finding their job so rewarding and they do not want to waste time and effort after many year training hard.
On the other hand, people can find happiness in working life in different ways. Firstly, not everyone dreams of doing a particular job, and by doing a variety of professions is also extremely exciting, turning over a new leaf on a completely new career path can be a new experience and new working inspiration for them. Secondly, some people only consider job as a mean of earning money, and they are only satisfied if that job offer salary enough for enjoying their life outside work. Finally, happy working life if often a result of work conditions, rather than the career itself. Without a positive working atmosphere and some enthusiastic colleagues, we can not work as productively as possible. Having an inspirational boss sometimes make our working life more satisfying regardless of the career.
To some up, it can certainly be satisfying to pursue the same profession for the whole of one’s life, but this is by no mean the only route of fulfilment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'developers'?
Suggestion: developers
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re satisfying regardless of the career. To some up, it can certainly be satisfyi...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...reer. To some up, it can certainly be satisfying to pursue the same profession for the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83287671233 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7096485997 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556164383562 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9242994051 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.692307692 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393207251807 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145153418904 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551812899738 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214869820911 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695488770343 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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