Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?
The standard of people’s life become more and more comfortable recently, while an increasingly people feel unsafe both at home and outside. In this report, I intend to analyse the causes about this phenomenon and give my solutions.
From my personal view, I think there are several reasons that cause this unsafety feeling. To begin with, as the fast economic development, many people become richness. By contrast, there are many people still struggling for living. Serious income gap promotes some people commit a crime, such as robbery or theft. In addition, medias broadcasts many negative news on TV everyday, which make people think their communities are dangerous. Moreover, laws are not comprehensiveness and strictness in some countries. This means that people who break laws may not get a harsh punishment and this lead to high crime rates.
I have some advices to address this problem. Firstly, governments should spend more money on police service. They need to increase the number of policeman on the road to protect people. Furthermore, governments should help those poor people to improve their employability. Many people steal or rob because they do not have a steady source of income, if governments help them find a job, it will decrease the crime rates and make people feel safer. Last but not least, medias should provide more positive news to audience instead of bad news to improve the safety feeling of our communities.
In conclusion, feeling safe is a basic requirement for our communities, governments have responsibility to protect people and provide a better social environment. I think if governments and relative departments can do what I mentioned above, the problem will be solved in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('increasingly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('people') instead of another adjective.
...re and more comfortable recently, while an increasingly people feel unsafe both at home and outside. I...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ias broadcasts many negative news on TV everyday, which make people think their communit...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ioned above, the problem will be solved in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21146953405 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90203081739 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1029861028 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5294117647 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315020478632 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814798273233 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772477589836 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177981379321 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278259683013 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.