In some countries, there has been an increase number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
How to educate children is one of the hottest topic that people discuss at present. More and more parents chose to educate their children at home by themselves rather than sending them to school. In this article, I intend to analyse the pros and cons about this phenomenon and give my own opinion.
There are numbers of benefits if parents teach their children at home. Firstly, children have more flexible schedule when they study at home, which means they can study at their own pace. In addition, kids need to accompanied by their parents when they are in their young age. Studying at home makes parents have more time to stay with them. Moreover, studying at home can save a lot of money for those low income families, because many schools have very high tuition fee, such as private schools.
On the other hand, there are also some drawbacks that children are educated at home by their parents. For example, in China, many children are the only child in a family, studying at home makes kids have no chance to communicate with their peers, which may influence children’s social skills. Furthermore, most parents are not professional teachers, they do not know what is the best way to educate their children. Based on this issue, study ing at home may reduce the learning efficiency.
In conclusion, educating children at home has both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, I think when children at their young age, for instance, under 6 years old, educating them at home has more benefits then drawbacks, But when children grow up, going to school is the better choice for them.
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also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84671532847 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50073514685 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.266162972 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367937463914 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158429007844 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806596325727 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251939168498 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266711881851 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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