Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
According to the latest report of the general statistics office, in 2018 the number of the unemployted students graduating universities has hit the highest point in many years, about 200,000 bachelors. Facing this situation, many people believe that student should do vocational traning in place of going to universities for academic study. I partly agree this point of view.
there are some reasons why people encourage students to follow vocational traning. Firstly, there is a serious lack of the qualified labour such as plumbers, electrecians…, but the need of society in these fields is enormous. Consequently, compared with competive rate of bachelors graduating university is many times as low as this of students doing vocational training, thus they have so much opportunities. Secondly, studying in the univerities wastes much more time and money than enrolling vocational courses. many of them may be last about from 6 months to 3 years while at least 4 years with financial, economic major students, even 7 years for physical ones. For instance, it seem better for someone who can’t afford to study in universities or always get bad scores at school to have no option but vocational training.
Instead of choicing job following the trend of society, students should be encouraged to study career based on their hobby, abiliti, family condition and variaty factors. Social prejudices, universities is the shortest road to lead the success or the fame of the universities decides their future, place too much stress on opting career of student. going to the universities seems compulsory for every students. this makes imbalance between the amount of intellectual labour and manual workers.
In conclusion, I believe that students should opt what is suitable for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36395759717 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94336320932 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646643109541 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9869370691 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291297041167 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929605306442 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081584735166 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160116860071 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621402510498 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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