Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?
In contemporary world, everyone is running to achieve their ambition at a flat pace. this makes it harder for most people to continue with their healthy diet. This essay will throw light on the various causes and will provide solution to this trending problem.
To commence with, the foremost reason is that people are becoming workaholic. In this era of cut-throat competition, people are focusing on work to meet the increasing demands of their their job so, instead of giving attention towards their diet they focus on their work to achieve more money. For instance, according to the recent survey 65% of people are working for 12-14 hours in the last year out which only 15% maintain their healthy diet. Furthermore, there is a increase in the trend of going out every night which means that people will have more junk food instead of home food. Moreover, this trend is increasing at a rapid pace in metropolitan cities which have adverse impact on their health.
However, there are various solution that can applied to solve this problem. Firstly, people should follow a diet chart to maintain their health. Also, they should find some time to focus on their personal life to do various activities like exercise, meditation etc to remain healthy. Secondly, government should impose laws for the regular checking of the food made by various food outlets. So that people eating food from their get healthy food.
Conclusively, apart from their work life people should focus on their health. As without healthy diet they would not be able to achieve their dreams. So they start taking these measures to maintain their diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35353045085 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4426844419 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214977103442 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859769713769 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586590145438 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148449145976 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252976462184 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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