Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this ever changing World, people prefer to seek such experiences that would give them immense thrill in their life. There are many risky activities taken up by people now-a-days. I personally feel that this trend is not good as there are risks involved.
Such people indulge in various activities to have a memorable experience. They like the thrill that such activities give them. They are influenced by various other people who tempt them to have such an experience. They would also like to enjoy the nature from a different view point. For Example, my cousin had climbed a mountain in America during this vacation with his friends for fun. His parents were disappointed at him for his actions.
On the other hand, people do not foresee the risks that is involved in such activities. While hand-gliding there is always a risk that the glider can tear or malfunction. Countless people have lost their life to such tragic events. Mountain climbing is also an dangerous sport. While climbing an unknown terrain, there can be wildlife that could harm them. When the sand on the mountain is loose, people can loose balance and fall to the ground. Rafting also involves risk of drowning. For Instance, I lost a friend who did not know swimming to such event.
To sum up, we can clearly say that there are numerous risks involved in such activities. People who indulge in them for fun should consider the dangers involved in them. When people loose their life, it affects the people surrounding them to a great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... tempt them to have such an experience. They would also like to enjoy the nature fro...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ragic events. Mountain climbing is also an dangerous sport. While climbing an unkn...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...nd on the mountain is loose, people can loose balance and fall to the ground. Rafting...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...e dangers involved in them. When people loose their life, it affects the people surro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84674329502 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46480190988 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547892720307 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.8814724002 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.25 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.05 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239978541601 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761836540891 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450169488938 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158758071893 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523066136105 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.96 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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