Gone are the days when humans used to communicate face-to-face with their friends but nowadays due to this modern era mostly individual prefer to do conversation with their friends through the social media it is my believe that disadvantages of this trend could certainly overshadow this merits.
There are several drawbacks of the conversation with friends through the social networking,a common criticism of internet conversation comes from falk who believes to make new friends. Sonetimes human being create the scam account on social media,and they do chatting with many internet users. they take some personal details and cheat with innocent friends. As a result,there are many kind of platforms in social networking and many fake accounts available in social media. Another negative effect can be sometimes many employees make the scam account and advertise their products. If people see their products then they show their good quality of products,and sell the local quality of products.It has affect on the financial status of falk because these kind of thigs are very expensive.
However, there are many disadvantages of this trend.One of the major demerit is that if people make friend from other societies. thay have no knowledge about their tradition or culture,and they see numerous types of activities of their culture and they see the first time. They feel breezing then these kind of situations creates the dispute amoung them.
Inspite of these negetive effects, One of the obvious advantage in the past, when people used to communicate face to face with their friends. They could easily to see the emotions of friends,and in the modern era, falk can be enhance their knowledge about other culture.
To sum up, it seems to me that the disadvantages more than advantages so people should online application wisely to chat with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, kind of, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25167785235 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70552429631 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3631636539 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381299144615 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123262890874 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786833849246 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212006466262 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565688256115 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.