some people think that the best way to run a bisiness is within a family what are the advantages and disadvantages of a family run business
Some falks argue that the running a business with a family is the best method to get success in business. it is my belief that positive effects of this trend could certainly offset its disadvantages
There are several advantages of the family venture. one of the most prominent pros is that people can trust each other in family trade. to be more clear, there is loyal and cooperative among family traders. when they have to face any lose in trade. then they stand with each other in all kind of sutuations. family mambers are more likely to support their existing business during ups and downs. another positive effect is that they have some goal in business. they think that their business will touch the sky and take the heights of success. for instance,in the ambani’s business all family members are involved in business. Therefore, it can be said that their business is successful and touch the sky.
There are some points to cons with the view point that the younger members of family can be careless towards their responsibilities. to explain it clearly, in the family business venture, some family members do warkhard and handle all situations in business, then other members become lazy , and other blood relation think their family and siblings are already concentrating on business, and they depend on their family members, sometimes these kind of situations create dispute with their siblings
To sum up, it seems to me that having a family business can be profitable if all the misunderstandings are solved before any business crisis
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99230769231 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63022285249 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515384615385 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 116.0667019 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.8461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302412886967 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104827708058 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813635204355 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190045952257 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457510921087 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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