Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
Over the years, people has been debating about the huge influence of cinematography. Some community consider that many of cinema lovers prefers overseas motion picture than motherland films. Personally, I believe that viewers usually get tired of their country’s films due to lack of diversity and authorities should support effort of their countrymen.
The first thing to be considered is the rapid feel tired in domestic films because of repeated plot, picture and actors. Apart from that the audience constantly needs to be in search of variety therefore they seek a special content abroad. For example, according to statistics in Russia most of the public prefers American superhero movies to a local film about the Second World war. Thus, the poorly developed cinema industry forces the client to find other producers in the market of capitalism.
Moreover, government are focused in new rise of culture and should care of young filmmakers for the following reasons further. In fact, young entrepreneurs are able to bring new discoveries to the endemic genre and the law will not only support its development but also receive decent profits. For instance, every year the Moscow mayor organizes festivals of young directors, where the winner receives a chance for the release of their masterpiece. Hence, politicians must promote cultural development otherwise stagnation will be ensured.
All in all, this is endless war between producers from different countries for the attention of viewer. We can develop our film industry in a distant ways, but society will still attend what they want…
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
... develop our film industry in a distant ways, but society will still attend what the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3188976378 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72493565989 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681102362205 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0852040403 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220522869988 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629974042569 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436941404255 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120918326034 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524855047896 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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