Many people regard film as less important art forms than literature and paintings.
To what extent do you agree o disagree?
A visual art is one of the types of many art forms and involves painting, ceramics, sculpture, crafts, photography and so on. In which, it is considered by hefty number of masses that literature and painting hold more value as discipline of art as compared to something like films. As regards to this statement, I am not on the same page due to number of factors such as author's imagination, innovative ideas and many others.
Let us begin with meaning of art - a diverse range of human activities in different aspects like visual, auditory and artworks expressing creativeness and skills of the creator, so that their beauty and in-depth feelings can be praised. Likewise, the literature and painting are both visual forms of art which shows the author's talent and thinking in text written in books and applying pigment into a solid surface. Some fine examples of such craft is the "A Hundred Years of Solitude" novel and "Mona Lisa" painting which are considered best among best, illustrating author's deep knowledge and feelings.
As regards to film-making, I believe it is even bigger part of the art as movies includes not only visual presentation but also beautiful audio tracks and dialogues to go along with it. To instantiate, it is often cited in Indian movies, in which, the culture of country is portrayed through escapist dance, scenery and songs combined with the writer’s storytelling. In addition, these pictures are often made by a group of people working at different aspects, some of them can be seen in the movie itself, while, others work behind the scenes. For instance, there are directors, producer, technicians, dialogue writer and labor crew who contribute their efforts, time and money toward one form of art.
To encapsulate, every art have its own significance in its own culture so saying that one of them is less paramount than others or is more preponderant is an absurdity in itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...oth visual forms of art which shows the authors talent and thinking in text written in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, while, as regards, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05279503106 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86107646069 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624223602484 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.0448499012 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 147.909090909 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149094749574 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553034405858 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385652666346 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879094257183 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355817120024 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.