Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. Do you agree or disagree?
One giant source of ailments and mortality around the globe is smoking. Hence, it is condemned that prohibiting the usage and manufacture of cigarettes and other goods related to it is something government should do for sake of wider public health. Even though it sounds right and is right, nevertheless, I do not agree with the notion as it will give rise to lot more problems such as unemployment than mitigating the existing ones like death rates.
Smoking is injurious to health is matter of fact and can not be changed by normal means. It give rise to various maladies like lung cancer, kidney failure and so on in the bodies of active smoker along with the passive ones - one who inhales the smoke released by other using cigarettes.
A common method to deal with such a problem suggested by the mass public is to aware the smoker about potential consequences of it which in itself does not fit right as many tobacco products have clearly written warning on them to not smoke as it is harmful for health, despite which, smoking is done at an alarming pace. Another solution is to ban the production of such commodities altogether to remove it from the market. Nevertheless, nobody seems to realize the repercussions of such legislation that will lead to mass unemployment especially in countries or cities which are already suffering from these kind of issues like India, Pakistan due to the population boom occurring in recent decade. In turn, it will also enhance the poverty, to reduce which various measures are taken everyday by authorities.
In my opinion, one method that is viable is to production of smoking good which doe not give rise to any ailments, although, it does not sound plausible at all. Beside it, all that can be done is publishing the stories of those who stopped smoking in recent or past decades to let smokers know that with some determination and self-control even they can become one of such persons.
To hammer down the nail, it is not wrong to assume that ban on tobacco products will leads to less deaths and illnesses, however, as a insurance, regime should also make plans to deal with consequential problem arising from such action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, nevertheless, so, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.848 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66594449913 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565333333333 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.3106747977 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145166735681 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533486785643 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566237045068 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828481942958 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451542090117 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.