Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer.
What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?
Following the development of society, it is obvious that life standards rise in an unimaginable speed every day. Therefore, it appears a recognizable gap between rich and poor in the community since the expectation of daily living never stops growing. Further in this essay, I will discuss more about the problem which causes this situation and possible measures that could be done to address such reality.
First and foremost, with lots of money comes with great opportunity to earn incomes. Undeniably, millionaires are offered with a variety of methods to generate even more money by simply developing new businesses. In addition, the rich people are usually ones that are smart and intelligent enough to manage their finance well and minimize the amount of loss money, capable of saving the fortunes. With great source of money, they ought to have responsibility to assist the society.
On the other hand, the inequality in making a living within poor people is clearly seen compared to wealthy folks. As a matter of fact, they are constantly being dragged down by the difficulty and harshness of society every single day. Consequently, it leads to a growth in disparity between the wealthy and the poor. Moreover, the poorer people tend to not receive as much respect as the more superior ones, for that reason, they are more likely to face unemployment which makes them even more miserable. Not only struggling with meeting their basic needs, unwealthy do not usually have the ability to invest their money effectively as well as managing the budget sensibly due to their lack of knowledge.
In conclusion, the gap between both types of people keeps widening, the poor keep growing poorer, accordingly, human should unite and come up with solutions or ways to help narrowing the space within them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...on of daily living never stops growing. Further in this essay, I will discuss more abou...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to narrow' or 'narrow'.
Suggestion: to narrow; narrow
... come up with solutions or ways to help narrowing the space within them.
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o help narrowing the space within them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07046979866 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66498100898 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6679764345 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236814007604 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710125043011 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699313120707 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13740057993 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057943442903 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.