Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
Many believe in order to get a suitable job, good academic performance in university education is the only guarantee. Others, however, think that working after graduation as well as gain experience in the world of work is better. I totally agree that by doing good in campus will eventually affect our promising future career.
The fast-track academical background which is possessed by applicants is matter in the application requirement of a workplace. By finishing course well in university, it can demonstrate the applicants capability and flexibility to deal with the sort of things in the workplace as they were doing it on campus. When job seekers in Indonesia, for instance, show an outstanding academical record in school, they are likely to get accepted in every job field. The faster the education is finished by the students, the higher their chances to get a good job.
Nevertheless, some people might say that to start working after graduating from university is wasting time. These people argue that study in universities will reduce the amount of time, which is needed by youngsters to get as many as possible work experiences. For them, It is advisable to immediately start working after school to get better an understanding of the world of work. Thus, campus life will only distract young generation to be mature in a workplace. Nonetheless, not everyone has an opinion like this.
Although completing a degree in undegraduate school will require several years of the future job seekers, bachelor degree is still necessary to open up bigger career opportunities among people who do not have it. At the end of the day, the higher the education are, the better job the people will get.
In conclusion, I surely agree that the undergraduate degree is important to get a good future career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'applicants'' or 'applicant's'?
Suggestion: applicants'; applicant's
...l in university, it can demonstrate the applicants capability and flexibility to deal with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07357859532 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94304119614 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1030547258 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401817998072 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12402730088 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875630260108 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202450156913 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101533340597 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.