In this modern era, university degree is highly considered by ample of folks to get a good job but other people opine that work should be started after the completion of school study to achieve a experience in the appropriate works of current world.However, according to my point of view, people need the university education for their better future career.Further,this essay will shed light on the several reasons in upcoming paragraphs.
T o begin with,many students have dreams to involve themselves in professional fields for brightening their future such as doctor and engineer. Therefore, the university education is very obligatory in order to pursue a professional jobs because universities provide several kind of facilities .For instance, much more rather emphasize on practical knowledge than theoretical and good quality staff members.Furthermore, universities conduct annual job placement programs, which are very helpful for students in their enrollments in good reputed companies without any wastage of time.
Furthermore,during the course Internship programs are fairly notable for students to learn very deeply about their specific studies.Hence,the university is best for students in which they can fulfill their desires and make themselves able to contribute in the competitive world .A part of this, universities allocate the pathway programs to their students in which student can boost the study skills and get opportunity to involve in the multicultural and linguistic atmosphere.
To conclude,I would like to say that the universities are the best source for accumulating a genuine study as well as deep information because of emphasize on the high level education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64453125 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39573123209 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.498561396 49.4020404114 288% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.0 106.682146367 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.7667163134 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.06120827912 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203391819487 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105239898013 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888963671956 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122026020624 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928629423114 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.32 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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