Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation create?. What are the possible solutions?
Enjoying life is our principal intention. In identical period, society desire achieves favorable both career and family life. The primary problem of this phenomena is paid-labor suffer from burn out. It is suggested that the most viable solution is to educate human beings about attempting focus management in their routine life.
The most obvious problem associated with reaching successful both career and family life is bad exhaustion and horrible frustration. That is to say that people have restricted time and endowment to use in their daily life. For instance, according to research from University of Tokyo, in 2010, 80% of citizens who live in Jakarta, Indonesia accomplish their undone-jobs in their leisure period. This results in psychological stress and repulsive cynicism being suffered by employees.
A long term solution to this predicament is to cultivate wage-earner about undertaking focus management. Such a technique requires worker to focus and accomplish one task in one time. With this approach, people can accomplish tasks done productively and efficiently. For example, In 2014, 70% of office-employees in Berlin, Germany can take joy in their family time and done their jobs excellently. Those paid-labors do and focus on one work in a time. What is more, their jobs are accomplished effectively and savor their "fun time" with their family.
In conclusion, having outstanding career and satisfying family life are desires of all human being. Since such ambitions make people to suffer from burn out, appropriate measure, such as educating people to do focus management, should be attempted. It is imperative that stakeholders and individuals should take this into consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...and family life. The primary problem of this phenomena is paid-labor suffer from bur...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'what is more', 'that is to say']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280528052805 0.247107183377 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.168316831683 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0825082508251 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.019801980198 0.0501214627716 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.039603960396 0.0437548338989 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118811881188 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0594059405941 0.0403226058552 147% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.04012612408 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.029702970297 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00660066006601 0.00163938923432 403% => OK
Determiners: 0.0528052805281 0.0861772015684 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.013201320132 0.021408717616 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00660066006601 0.011925033212 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1726.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53787878788 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401515151515 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.314393939394 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257575757576 0.203846283523 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.204545454545 0.137316102897 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04012612408 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 62.5714928105 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5294117647 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6937133519 49.517814964 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.529411765 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.9688057041 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 2.01449275362 1.69124875643 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239013078925 0.332605444948 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0810444377975 0.102741220458 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0459946244128 0.0668466124924 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462031957896 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974908338803 0.148594505496 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904066489842 0.134430193775 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432666085469 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339857146226 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0808318896223 0.0638462369009 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161883807781 0.228012699653 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109812239177 0.058150111329 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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