Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay

It is said that teachers are very essential in education . From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement.This essay includes two points that they are our ideal role models and our motivators

First of all, a teacher is responsible for the academic as well as the overall development of the student. A teacher share academic knowledge , ethical values and life experiences that assist us to become a better person . For example , the way they dress , talk and behave influence the students very much . It sets an example for students to follow , especially curious young children tend to follow things adults do . Moreover , they even teach us skills such as soft skills,social skills,leadership skills etc and set the suitable approaches for us.
The second factor is the motivation. Teachers are really our motivators.They not only impart the knowledge but also contribute to the mental development of a student.Teachers help them overcome their difficulties and motivate them to achieve goals in life.In addition, sometimes students feel lost and alone , teachers will act as a friend to help them out and give them advices.A thoughtful teacher also encourages the student to be creative and think outside the box.They provide them the necessary freesom to explore their potential.

To sum up , everyone said that teacher is our second mother . We can not deny the importance of teachers in bringing us up and in education.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16309012876 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01511947349 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630901287554 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 131.898786954 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.3 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149993096829 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580149139435 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488771946096 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945073254185 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521115962089 0.056905535591 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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