Many people think that the government should spend money to explore the outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.
Opinion is divided as to whether the government should invest in the exploration of space. It will set the stage for finding alternative energy at best and waste money at worst. I think we should welcome space exploration with open arms on condition that enough money is input into infrastructure construction.
Lacking necessary fossil fuel and other natural resources that are essential to industrial development, scientists go to great lengths to search for new energy. Chances are that the remote and untouched planets are buried various kinds of resources, so it is imperative to spend money exploring the outer space. Furthermore, exploiting outside the earth mirrors the strong comprehensive national power of a country to some extent, which is one of the important target of a government. Last but not least, it is a arduous but rewarding process in a long run.
People who take a dim view of the exploration deem that it does not amount to much compared to millions upon millions dollars it has wasted and valuable social resources it has occupied, for the reason that the scientific exploration activities are likely to turn out abortive. What’s more, the unpractical research is of secondary importance when there are many social issues such as poverty, terrorism and the endless wars remained to be solved. Additionally, The governments are supposed to invest the public money in the fields that concerned to the daily life of people.
As far as I am concerned, exploring the outer space is inductive to human being in long-term interests, and the government should support it as long as the country have a solid economical foundation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinion is divided as to whether the government should invest in the exp...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nds of resources, so it is imperative to spend money exploring the outer space. F...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a government. Last but not least, it is a arduous but rewarding process in a long...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...xploration deem that it does not amount to much compared to millions upon millions...
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Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...and the government should support it as long as the country have a solid economical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, as to, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13284132841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94968541618 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8528172081 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304972965567 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983613619672 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760620288062 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158809977395 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620522595027 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.