Videogames are chosen over the other conventional sort of games nowadays. This is a widespread concern among the people. There are number of problems associated with children and society, but also some straightforward measures can be taken against the hazardous problems.
On the one hand, perhaps the major problem need to deal with is the level of violence found in these games. Moreover, many aggressive characters are found, ranging from soldiers to criminal and killers. Second issue is the obsessive way that some children use the games . for example, preferring their computer to real friendship and as consequence they become isolated and socially naïve. finally, there are physical effects from excessive gaming, including eye strain, insomnia and damage to posture. Furthermore, reading books and doing extra curriculum activities are replaced by these video games. Besides, recent surveys by education organization have illustrated that the average minutes of children study has faced with dramatic decrease. Consequently ,both children and society would suffer from negative points of video games.
On the other hand, turning to possible solution, probably must effective measure is to strictly control the content of these games. This would prevent unsuitable material influencing young minds. To tackle the problem at obsessive use, schools and government should organize seminars and do more counseling on the subject of physical side effects, so that youngsters are constantly aware of the risks. Moreover, we could make children interested in other types of games, ranging from football cricket.so that they could develop their interest in suitable physical games.
Overall, spending more time behind video games has become controversial. It seems that this problem has both social and physical effects. Whereas, solution will require combined action by manufactures ,parents and authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, moreover, second, so, whereas, for example, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70979020979 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73922116019 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664335664336 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4461232863 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7222222222 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257042504201 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663481100442 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525365505569 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130249013268 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673175351797 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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