Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three years old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature? Is it possible to stop a child from growing up to be a criminal ?
Due to the developments in sciences, children nowadays can be predicted whether they tend to commit illegal activities or not; therefore, many people claim that human nature has some relationships with crimes. As far as I am concerned, I do not advocate with that perspective, believing that preventing youngsters from being criminals.
Firstly, relationships and family play essential roles in changing the nature of people, making them become good persons. By learning lessons from family and staying connected with friends, people can improve their behaviors. Therefore, they are less likely to commit crimes against society. According to an experiment on an American article, the well-being of people allowed to connect with their families maintains at good levels, while that of the rest of volunteers isolated from acquaintances turn to be bad. Secondly, experiences also could impact the thoughts of people, so that they could manage emotions, which directly modify the actions of individuals. To be specific, people being involved in charity activities, will develop their senses of kindness and nourish good wills. As a result, they hardly commit violence on other people and become gentle.
Besides, there are several feasible solutions which could help children to avoid becoming criminals, the most obvious one is offering universal education for every child. Getting exposed to much useful knowledge without difficulties, the majority of children can differentiate which are right or wrong; therefore, they are likely to have a proper career instead of choosing to be criminals. For example, in some African countries, the crime rates among teenagers decrease dramatically since free education systems have been deployed. Moreover, governments can also impose strict policies related to controlling violent content on social media. By doing this, authorities can help children to avoid watching inappropriate movies or television shows. Because of this, children can have a good growing environment to fully develop themselves; therefore, fewer teenagers will be involved in crimes.
In conclusion, human nature can be changed by staying connected with society and having useful experiences. Also, education and polic
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'connecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: connecting
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...cation for every child. Getting exposed to much useful knowledge without difficult...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67261904762 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87447619205 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7874281681 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.117647059 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199278350411 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060791421431 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431034649093 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127850035305 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302218372506 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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