Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time
Having a one year time for journey or earn job practice is a decision of many younger before getting into college. I do not support that this idea can bring students more advantage and not worth it. In the following essay, I will discuss further.
Firstly, if you want to have a job experience in the gap year time, I think you should do it in the time after graduation. Working before have knowledge and professional skills cannot bring you work experience related to your future job and your wages are not high. As proof, waiter, catering or retail are the only work you can have at this time, and it cannot bring many useful experience for your faculty and work. By contrast, if you spend the gap year time studying, you can have an opportunities to graduate early and get an internship for the leading company. These companies provide a great chance to gain commercial experience in your chosen profession and it will bring you higher levels of employment.
Secondly, take a gap year to travel is not worth relaxing. You should think about the repercussion after a long time journey,it will hard for you to get back to study and creative study habits. After a year live life to the full and put yourself at ease, you do not want to back to school and suffer from the pressure of assignment, examination and long thesis anymore. Similarly, your concentrate on study are widely dispersed by thinking about the later journey; moreover, your own discipline is also affected by many bad habit created in gap time
However, there’s no denying that having a break is completely necessary. In some country, in order to apply for the desire university students have to go through a stressful examination; therefore, after that extreme time they need to switch off and enjoy freedom. For instance, ‘Cao Khao’ in China is one of the most arduous exam worldwide, in three-year period after examination, Chinese student can solve nearly 20000 exam and spend average 5 minute taking a meal. Additionally, have some job to afford studying expense in university is a good idea for students as the expenditure is costly.
To summarise, starting college immediately is the best choice and if you want some rest or work experience, take it in summer holiday or after graduation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun experience seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much useful experience', 'a good deal of useful experience'.
Suggestion: much useful experience; a good deal of useful experience
... have at this time, and it cannot bring many useful experience for your faculty and work. By contrast,...
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Line 2, column 486, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: an opportunity; opportunities
...he gap year time studying, you can have an opportunities to graduate early and get an internship...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...e repercussion after a long time journey,it will hard for you to get back to study ...
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Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed by many bad habit created in gap time However, there’s no denying that having ...
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Line 4, column 422, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'exam' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'exams'.
Suggestion: exams
... Chinese student can solve nearly 20000 exam and spend average 5 minute taking a mea...
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Line 4, column 507, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to study'.
Suggestion: to study
.... Additionally, have some job to afford studying expense in university is a good idea fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82097186701 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68348730698 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531969309463 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1694488929 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382078075634 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123738588263 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657654521292 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186030187237 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646575917396 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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