Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
There is no denying the fact that the way we used to do work at home has changed progressively. Due to advancement in technologies, it is possible to do maximum work by machinery instead manually, and I believe this progress provides numerous benefits than drawbacks.
The first and foremost, this development saves time as it takes less time when we use electrical appliances for our work. There are several equipments which are used in kitchen such as mixer grinders, juicers, microwave ovens and others helps to finish work in minutes rather than several hours. Additionally, innumerable automatic cleaning equipments perform task in very less time and even does not require human intervention. For example, a robotic vacuum cleaner can clean the house in less time and also without human involvement. Therefore, the use of machinery contributes in time saving and self-regulating of tasks.
However, it cannot be denied that this growth is dimishing the grace of workdone by hands. Although machines help in perform task in less than but it has some repercussions also. Firstly, the harmful radiations which are emitted by equipments degrade the health. For instance, the excess use of oven reduces the food quality. Apart from this, people avoid to do work when work is done by machines and it leads to many health problems. As a consequence, the overindulgence of everything has adverse effects.
In a nutshell, even though the usage of machines at home helps to save time and performs tasks individually, however the disadvantages cannot be ignored and should be used in moderation so it could not affect the health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e saving and selfregulating of tasks However it cannot be denied that this growth is...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ven reduces the food quality Apart from this people avoid to do work when work is do...
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid doing'.
Suggestion: avoid doing
...the food quality Apart from this people avoid to do work when work is done by machines and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration so it could not affect the health
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03383458647 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82237702772 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 266.0 20.2975951904 1311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1339.0 106.682146367 1255% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 266.0 20.7667163134 1281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 97.0 7.06120827912 1374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200730609723 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200730609723 0.084324248473 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125090957885 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651594274949 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 135.3 13.0946893788 1033% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.51 50.2224549098 -395% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.0 11.3001002004 947% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.16 8.58950901804 246% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 108.4 10.1190380762 1071% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 60.0 10.7795591182 557% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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