Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
In this modern world of machinery, most of our household chores can be easily done by machines instead of doing them by hands. Although this style of living has some advantages, it has equal number of disadvantages. In this essay, I will try to elaborate those advantages and disadvantages.
To start with, I will list out the advantages of using electronic devices for house hold work. This method will be very convenient, relaxing and physically supporting in the situations, when we have some medical conditions or big family get-together. In both these situations, it is not feasible to do work by hand. As taking help of electronic gadgets will not only saves our efforts and time, it will also give us better results.
Although, we cannot disagree that this approach will have some drawbacks as well. The first and foremost crucial drawback is that it impact's our physical health as we become more and more dependent on machines, thus we become lethargic and feel physically week. Another major drawback of replacing hand work with machines is that it cost us a lot of money in terms of buying and maintenance For example, buying a washer dryer would easily cost us 1500$ and an annual maintenance of 500$.
To conclude, in today's modern world we are surrounded by millions of machines that can assist us in household chores, but it is totally our choice to which level we want to be machine dependent. In my opinion, there are equal number of advantages and disadvantages of utilizing machine for work that can be done by hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87121212121 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76323096442 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.571217007 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220581676008 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837437622266 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08039005377 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142961340795 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724126926956 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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