Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.
Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages ?
Currently machines become a common thing and is mostly done by many people. In my opinion, using a machines has many benefits rather than non-usefulness.
In the one hand, the main benefits of using machines are more effective than humans. Machines can consistently produce the same thing even more than humans can do. Because, the machines can work without stop to rest. In addition, the use of machines is also very helpful for humans because humans no longer need to work hard to get the job done. For example, washing clothes, when washing clothes is not necessary to use human hands, the machines can do it even from the start the clothes are dirty to clean, fragrant, even dry. And this is one form of benefit that can be felt by humans. Humans can do other things that are more important, which cannot be done with machines like thinking and others.
In the other hand,there are disadvantages of using machines that cannot be ignored. At present, the use of machines has reduced human labor. Therefore, currently the unemployment rate is increasing every year. This happened because many things that had previously been done by humans were replaced by machines. In addition, the use of machines that incline to use electricity will affect the environment both pollution and natural resources used for electricity generation. For example, the use of a washing machine, which of course will require more water and electricity.
To sum up, from where I stand, I believe that used machines give more advantage than disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a machine' or simply 'machines'?
Suggestion: a machine; machines
...ne by many people. In my opinion, using a machines has many benefits rather than non-usefu...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ame thing even more than humans can do. Because, the machines can work without stop to ...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...hinking and others. In the other hand,there are disadvantages of using machines tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, for example, in addition, of course, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00389105058 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66286058734 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525291828794 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4929020193 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284252563837 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103869417536 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721886841757 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174506147224 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534767756028 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.