Many universities today are offering online courses for students as an alternative of courses delivered on campus. Do advantages outweigh of this development disadvantages?
With the advent of the Internet, several traditional classrooms are being replaced by online courses. I am of the opinion that the benefits of this trend eclipsed by its drawbacks.
On the one hand, replacing offline courses by online classes is disadvantageous to a certain extent. The main drawback is that it get rid of physical interaction. Therefore, students could not develop social skills such as communication and teamwork skills, which can be gained by discussions and group activities in traditional classes. Another is that online learning may not possible for some subjects. For example, chemistry or engineering could not be learned at home with a computer because these subjects require a lot of specific equipment.
On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of this trends are more significant than its disadvantages. First, the prices of online classes is much cheaper than traditional courses. The reason is that running virtual classes does not involves numerous operation costs such as space, facilitiies and staff wages. Second, web-based classes are also very convenient. They help learners overcome time and geographical boundaries, which is particularly helpful for people in rural and remote areas.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks of delivering online courses instead of conventional one, my view is that they are outweighed by several benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47465437788 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01366986171 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654377880184 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7111412916 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6923076923 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180705730619 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542061082466 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524131632329 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103267449677 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475083727063 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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