Many young people find their first days at college difficult. What are the difficulties they face on their first days? What can colleges do to make them feel more comfortable?
Attending a university is undoubtedly a new chapter of one’s life. Apart from excitement for a new experience, many may find it is quite challenging to adapt themselves to college life. Therefore, colleges play an essential role by offering assistance and guidance to ensuring a smooth transition for freshmen.
The first challenge confronts new students is the change of study requirements. It is difficult for quite a few students to adjust to new teachers’ way of instructing owing to the reason that there are more reading assignments and group projects after class. The differences are significant enough to require adjustments in their learning style and attitudes to knowledge, Students have to change their study approaches to handle such changes, which may lead to stress and frustration.
In addition to study issues, students have to adapt to life changes like food and accommodations. It takes time for newcomers to get used to living in another city or country for colleges. The local food may not be to one’s taste and therefore result in homesickness. Furthermore, for majority of freshmen, it is a brand new experience to live in a dorm and how to getting along with roommates is likely to become a problem.
To address to those issues, colleges may contribute in various aspects. Firstly, advisors or specific committee should be available to students who are seeking consultations in study or mental issues. Secondly, the orientation for new students could be more detailed by introducing facilities on campus as well as surrounding areas of the college. A handbook containing such information could come to handy, making it easier for newcomers navigate the campus. Lastly, different kinds of foods and accommodation should be available to students from different backgrounds to create a welcoming living atmosphere on campus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: adapting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34915254237 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15140493423 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2818155298 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819264029496 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283617218746 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315938919696 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519538252667 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364466745732 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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