As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples your own knowledge experience.
In today's era globalization is indispensable to survive in this world. Globalization refers to processes that increase world wide exchange of national and cultural resources. like advances in transportation and telecommunication infrastructure. But some people believed that globalization will lead to the total loss of cultural identity.Lets discuss both the views to seek more clarification.
First and foremost, Tradition or cultural are the heart and soul of the country.Children Inherits their tradition from their parents .It has been well said that "Necessity is the mother of invention". The same thing holds true tradition skills.Now people celebrate the cultural programs more than the bygone era. I think the little change must be their because change is the law of nature. Everything has to be changed according to the time.But it doesn't mean that people has forgot their cultural and traditional skills.Lets discuss about the second view in upcoming lines.
On the contrary side, It can be clearly observed that technology replaced the old culture.for example in past decade the marriages were simple and sober due to advancement nowadays they have spent extravagant on marriages or parties.Due to this dowry problem and other problems raised day by day.In addition their is a trend showoff.Our forefathers would be astonished to see the present condition of the world,if they get up from their graves.
Personally,I think it is the parents responsibility to gave the knowledge about their tradition to the children.We should bring the tradition values of respect from our ancestors into the modern society
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- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent d 56
- As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalisation. Some people fear that globalisation will inevitably lead the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent d 61
- Schools concentrate far too much on traditional subjects which do not adequately prepare students for the realistic demands of the modern working world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, as for, as to, for example, i think, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57768924303 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27897401765 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.097198843 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122477566145 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578255936582 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933704229832 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735343392292 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821569657394 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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