The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the media, people usually post negative news such as scandals of well-known artists or serious accidents. Some people contend that the mediators should supply more cheerful information to viewers. In my viewpoint, readers need to perceive two faces of the society, therefore, the best way is a balance between good and bad news coverage.
On the one hand, people should update the positive news owing to these reasons. Firstly, It helps them to gain useful lessons and form good behaviours. As an example, while you read a report that people participating in “challenge for change” gathered and cleaned beaches and mountains. As a result, viewers are aware of protecting the environment, just as they may join in the challenge to keep the country purity. Moreover, people will love our life as long as they read information about a good person. To illustrate, a teenager helps his friend who is disabled to go to school.
On the other hand, bad news plays a crucial role for their effects. The first reason is that people can get rid of dangerous situations and keep safe. If they see negative information, they will perceive that they do to protect themselves. In my experience, I have read news about a girl who was raped at night, so I always go home before 7 pm. In addition to that, they evaluate their idols through bad news which is the unique channel about well-known artists. As long as their idol breaks the law such as not paying taxes, they will not respect and admire them.
To conclude, both good and bad news needs to be reported on the public because of those advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79783393502 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68113680587 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8524478995 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162339812111 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048592319521 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368249984969 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105218263225 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282282861474 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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