When designing a building, the most important factor is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, many buildings are constructed with various style. Some people contend that the function of the building is more vital than its appearance. In my viewpoint, both decoration and application play an important role in designing a building, therefore, I disagree with that idea.
On the one hand, each building has a different purpose, so it needs to prioritize its use in a design. Firstly, when you prepare for buying or repairing your home, you must take consideration of something which is used on a daily basis. To illustrate, as long as people live in a family with four members, they will design a house which includes a kitchen, a living room and three bedrooms. Moreover, for public areas, they are more concern about the application of the buildings. As an example, people go to the hospital to cure the diseases. Although the walls are painted which is hideous, it looks neat and clean.
On the other hand, the perfect appearance gives many advantages for the building because of these reasons. The first reason is that it can attract more people. They would like to go to some places which are big, luxurious and unique to discover and take some photos. In addition to that, the outward appearance can change their emotions. While you are tired and stressful after a hard working day, but for sitting in a chair and seeing appealing decoration in your living room, you will get out of negative impacts.
To conclude, aim and appearance are important to construct a building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88715953307 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70729893372 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8514307055 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195865970944 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572958163999 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580706874598 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12024380632 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527389686475 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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