Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason,
some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days, it seems that more women are found “male occupations” than ever before and vice versa. There are a variety of differing views on the question of whether or not women and men are equated at all jobs on societies. Although many people still hold to the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by men and some other by women, it is my personal belief that people of their sex are capable of doing any occupation as well. The reasons for my opinion are as follows.
First of all, I can not deny that it is a mistake to the base of view on broad generalizations about the characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Although a popular belief that there are traits which are typical of female and others which are typical of male, there are exceptions to every rule. It is not true to say that all women are physical of weak and all men are poor interpersonal communicators; accepted gender roles are not appropriate for everybody especially job interview. If man and women desire to pursue a career which is traditionally reserved for the opposite sex, I am convinced that he/she should be provided conditions to prove him/herself capable.
Furthermore, I would contend that having male and female employees in the workplace bring a sense of balance. I believe that men and women frequently, no means always, have different methods of doing things. Before judging these differences to be a weakness, I feel that we should view them as opportunities for innovation and the discovery of more effective and efficient work practices. A person’s weakness can thus be transformed into strengths.
In summary, for the reasons stated above, I confirm that women and men can do any job equally well and that a person’s individual capacity is more vitally important than their gender in this regard. Difference between men and women should be paid attention as opportunities till weakness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...ere are a variety of differing views on the question of whether or not women and men are equated at all...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, i feel, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96352583587 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00077440632 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55623100304 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5733332995 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358179366277 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118894840343 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846186007833 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227021185223 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758474470876 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.