Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason,
some jobs are better done by men and others by women.
Do you agree or disagree?
These days, it seems that more women are entering “male occupations” than ever before and vice
versa. While some still hold to the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by
men and others by women, it is my personal belief that people of their sex are capable of doing
any job effectively. The reasons for my position are as follows.
First of all, I believe it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalisations about the
characteristics of men and women as such stereotypes are often inaccurate. Although there are
certain traits which are typical of men and others which are typical of women, there are
exceptions to every rule. Not all women are physically weak, just as not all men are poor
interpersonal communicators; conventional gender roles are not appropriate for everybody. If a
man and woman desire to pursue a career which is traditionally reserved for the opposite sex, I
believe he/ she should be provided with the opportunity to prove him/ herself capable.
Secondly, I would contend that the presence of both males and females in a workplace brings a
sense of balance. Men and women frequently, though by no means always, have different
methods of doing things. Rather than judging these differences to be a weakness, I feel that we
should view them as opportunities for innovation and the discovery of more effective and
efficient work practices. A person’s weakness can thus be transformed into strengths.
In summary, I once again reaffirm my position that both male and female employees are an asset
to any industry and as our stereotypes about men and women are not always appropriate, we
must not discourage anyone from choosing an occupation simply because of his/ her gender.
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| 2019-07-17 | Mahan77 | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | Diem Hang 1612 | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | Diem Hang 1612 | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, i feel, in summary, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09278350515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03401203624 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604810996564 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7574696749 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294329132592 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990249445387 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786459230097 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800254559745 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822918761844 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.