Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced.
Nowadays, Space Exploration are becoming popular because of growing technology and greater enhancements in advanced tools. For many countries, especially developed and under developed nations are allocating more budget to study solar system in depth. However there are both pros and cons for spending money on this. I will completely agree that this missions should be continued further to improve technology to a greater extent or next level.
Owing to the technology change, Demand for the source of many materials increasing and to overcome this space exploration is must. Eventhough huge amount is spend on mission, the data collected and transmitted to earth has valuable insights. Many scientific theories produced are result of a space study.Instace, Due to space exploration now scientist are able to study about black hole theory and prove Newtons work are not real. In their study they are able to find faster materials than speed of light. Also nowadays it has made possible to forecast weather reports in advance and provide greater internet connectivity. For Example, Now companies started implementing 5G technology for smooth connection.
Instead to reduce missions the rockets re-usability can be made possible. For example SpaceX founded by Elon Musk recently launched a Falcon heavy vehicle which carries satellites to space and performs safe landing of rockets which will make cheaper.
To conclude, Money spent on space has greater advantage since it helps to improve technology and develop more advanced theories and to forecast weather report.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48971193416 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76190250945 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5687141652 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175916427835 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586038999813 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555625029962 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978791394711 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044331422256 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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