The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from

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The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from

The line chart gives information about the figures of yearly visitors to the Australia from 1975 to 2005, While the tabular data provides country wise total for years 1975 and 2005.

Overall, The number of foreign residents to the Australia are increased for every year. During initial years, numbers are very less and it went up steadily for every year. Within the span of three decades the visitors are increased by more than three times of initial value.

Firstly, 8.8 millions from other countries visited the Australia in 1975, Among this major them are from the Japan and The South Korea, which reads about 3.2 and 2.9 millions respectively. And, to further add on only 3 lakhs china citizens traveled to the Australia during this period. From the Europe, The Britain, The United States travelers collectively accounts to 24 Lakhs.

Secondly, The numbers inclined up by 50% in 1985 and reached 16 millions and further rose to 70% in 1995. Finally, it was increased and hit a high of 30.4 millions in 2005. For 1995 and 2005, It has similar trends, The Japan and the South Korea in top two, while the china and the USA are in the bottom two spots.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75247524752 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27879842516 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589108910891 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7528615322 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149485089239 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523062504211 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502517994176 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897503921508 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541797300651 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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