Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
To be healthy is more important in our life. Nowadays people have a problem as obesity which is growing day after day. The obesity problem affected not only adults, it affects children too. Obesity can be result of different causes and strategies. Of course there solutions which can stop the growing obesity.
Obesity started being epidemic and became rampant in various countries in twentieth centrum. There are various reasons of common and widespread trend. Now a lot of people are not interested in physical activities, because they have busy schedule. Another reason can be social networks, TV, online game playing and etc. Because we started to watch our lovely games on Tv or on the internet and play our favorite games virtually and etc. and it restricted our physical movement. Technology develops every after day. A lot of parents because of security buys their children tablets, computers, game consoles. And it restricted children physical activity.
Furthermore irregularity in diet is other reason. Before we interested in quality of nutrition and spend more time for choosing healthy foods. But now there are a lot of variations of fast food as burgers, rolls, pizza. Most parents us fast food for their children food box. Addiction people to fast food became from the childhood.
Of course there are some ways to tackle this issue and first of all people should understand this problem. For solving this problem government should provide some knowledge in handling obesity. Tv should show some true stories, people should take care of their health and sometime people shy of to ask question how to do this. In the canteens and stores must be providing instruction of healthy food and how provide it to children. Parents should persuade their children to do physical activities, walks, playing real games and etc.
Only after this people can win obesity problem. In early years it is easy to teach to control average of activity and food balance. Otherwise it is impossible
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- Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 56
- Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'controlling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'teach' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09146341463 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55011489167 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 26.369642104 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8518518519 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1481481481 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.07407407407 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147172366679 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432809274049 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481007470607 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832583646242 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483398729388 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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