Modern communication systems benefits many people yet there are some that oppose to them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above the statement.
Nowadays, people use the new technology systems such as a social network as well as people easily do communication with each other. Nevertheless, modern communication system is very beneficial for citizens while, Others people against this modern system. However, I am personally agree for this statement and explain my of view points in this paragraph.
To start with, communication is very important for everyone. Nowadays, people use the modern technology as well as it is good way to communication with friends. In Addition, the new modern technology connect with the friends when their friends visit in abroad so that's way they easily connect with the new technology as well as easily communication with them. Although, the new modern communication system have also cheaper and people communication are easily long distance.
Eventhough, the people use this system so that it is good way to get knowledge about other countries. Furthermore, people save their time. For example, they use a what's up, facebook while, that they attrection the new people.
Moving towards, the people also busy with the new system that's way, they are not spend time with their family as well as, they communication with the friends. Apart from this, people use the different types of apps and they are seracha job in the outside country. Moreover, it is very beneficial to find a new job and activities. Whereas, this system all provide a safety for people. For example, the girls go to travel outside so, they easily connected with their parents.
In contrast, people more than use the internet they communication with each other and make a new friends as well as they easily communication with their friends at a home and time save.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08098591549 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79749255412 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454225352113 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5979052679 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4375 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238209267399 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965863114375 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624540475466 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154625601576 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630757507913 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.