Modern technology is now very common in many work places.
How do you think this has changed the way we worked?
Do you think there are disadvantages to reply too much on technology?
In today's competitive business environment speed is the key for all the business processes. The globalization of the world economies have enhanced the value of information technology. Modern technology is now very common in most work places. The business processes would be inefficient and ineffective without the technology.
Almost all kinds of businesses are relaying on computers for automating their traditional processes. Businesses use wide variety of database, to maintain the records of the customers or the employers. In older days, piles of of registers were used to store the informati...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
... or the employers. In older days, piles of of registers were used to store the inform...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'have been'.
Suggestion: have been
...formation, nowadays all the information have been have been compressed into computer files. The inf...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... nowadays all the information have been have been compressed into computer files. Th...
^^^^
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...ines and some tools, etc highly rely on computers computer technology is not only used in...
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Line 3, column 713, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ventory control management systems, etc. In manufacturing firm, all transactions ...
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Line 5, column 400, Rule ID: ALONG_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a long time'?
Suggestion: a long time
...cing and shipping the product will take along time which customers will not understand. So...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...k would stop, the data could be lost or may be it can get hacked. Highly qualified wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0563002681 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87213336552 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549597855228 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9924034206 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7272727273 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.59090909091 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121902617492 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435294668528 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859494648368 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742430876342 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491888110077 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.