In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays , many people consider the killing of animals to produce food and other products to be unnecessary. In my view, I completely agree with this idea and will discuss several compelling reasons in this essay
As a matter of fact, the excessive consumption of meat on a regular and long-term basis is the primary cause of many diseases for people these days. Therefore, experts are calling for a change in human diets so that people can enjoy a better physical and mental well being. Fortunately, many alternative meat products are available on the market. Vegetarian diets now are being favored by a growing number of people and can provide consumers with adequate nutrition to support their bodies. For instance, mushroom and tofu are a great source of protein, a kind of nutrient presumably only found in meat, and can therefore used as substitute
Furthermore, medical experiments on animals and medicines manufactured from animals’ body parts are the main cause of animal suffering. Nowadays, herbs and many other types of plant-based medicines such as ginseng can cure many diseases, prolong human life expectancy and aid medical practitioners in the treatment of many life-threatening illnesses. More seriously, thousands of animals are being pushed to the verge of extinction due to the demand for products made from their fur in the fashion industry. However, there are now similar products made from plants and artificial materials that can fulfil people’ s demand. As a result, animals do not have to suffer their unnecessary need anymore.
In conclusion, I believe that it is not necessary for human beings to slaughter wild animals to produce food and other products
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Nowadays , many people consider the killing of ani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1978021978 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87505313407 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5793992768 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182957736071 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734772582811 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626757144575 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128565574658 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653474595683 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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