in the modern world it is possible to stop, work and communicate with people via internet and live live without any face to face contact with others is it a positive or a negative development.
Now days, internet has become the main market of all over the world. It is stated that internet has made it possible to work and communicate with people easily without any face to face contact anyone. I believe it is completely positive development and this essay will discuss my viewpoints subsequently.
To commence with , people expanding their business by the use of internet. In past sellers did not have reach to the vast market but,now in present,with the help of modern technology they are developing good network of business all over the world and making high profits.For instance, an annual report on growth of small scale industries on 24 news that their was 80% increase in their work. Hence internet is helping many small industry to increase their business.
However internet is providing great variety of option to the buyers who love to buy unique and various things. On the world web platform that give more option of same item in diverse range to the shoppers. For example, Amazon is world biggest company which rules the internet market of shopping and they provide everything to their customers and masses are crazy to purchase stuff from that website that is the reason it is fastest growing company of the world. world wide web is the best shop for those who love to do shopping.
Moreover, it is made life as easy as pie to contact anyone in the any part of globe and it has become very famous trend of social media. Masses are using the social media, on that platform they share joyable movements of their life and everything what are they doing and they are become more socialable. For instance relatives and others had information what others are doing and it is making the communication as a piece of cake. Therefore, in 21st century it is very convenient to communicate anyone.
To sum up, internet has made a sea change in all proponents life. Therefore the internet has positive effects on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84084084084 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52194818909 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6522900814 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245623781115 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081098761423 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110635535619 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137830067923 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112002484706 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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