In this burgeoing era where practical skills are said to be of utmost importance these days, one should not forget that books or texts have their own weightage too from employability point of view. Though theoratical concepts are to lame at times but the basics are having vital role to play in education sector these days. We would be further discussing on the pros and corns for the same in the subsequent paragraphs.
This shifting of concern for more practical skills has lead a huge change in the current scenario of education system.As earlier theoritical knowledge was to be the key element to be focused . For instance if we talk about any job, here academics were the only basis that candidate was judged on. On the contrary these days if a candidate doesnot aquire a proper prior practical skill to handle the situted post then he or she is not selected.
On the other hand of we see some jobs are only devoted to practical based knowledge also involves skills which are started up from the basic knoweledge which one acquires from texts only. For an example if we think that a person who is working in a bank can understand the cash inflow and outflow only if he or she knows the basics behind the flow of cash that is either debit or credit. So theoratical knowledge has its own impotrance to play when it comes about attaining knowledge and skills to fit in a proper suitable job.
To conclude, education system is ever evolving definetely but one can not totaly depend on one skill type be it theoratical or practical both are to be acquired by the student to attain certain postion in an organisation.
- Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages ? 56
- With a fast pace of modern life more and more people towards fast food for their main meals.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 61
- Today more people are travelling than ever before.Why is this the case?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? 56
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he current scenario of education system.As earlier theoritical knowledge was to be...
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, as to, for instance, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49953100057 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679347826087 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0239724084 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.142857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20670874453 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820192501073 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681891947459 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128801828346 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0108291576318 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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