More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult.
Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city.
How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is argue that a majority of people are interested in traveling to cities because of finding a better quality of life while living in a town would not be easy. I believe that government can take steps to mitigate the problems.
There are variety of problems if someone want to settle in a big city. Firstly, It is clear that living in an urban area comes at a huge cost. For example, renting or purchasing an apartment, doing shopping, going around. It seems to at least rent a flat needs an adequate deposit while most immigrant are not able to provide. Going shopping meanwhile cost a fortune when you have a family. Secondly, getting stuck in traffic is common activity if you are living in a crowed area, and some people have to suffer from high level stress because they face with a competitive condition at work and they cannot manage time
Finally, the elderly and children have to breathe the polluted air while it will increase significantly.
On the other hand, the level of life can be improved by some measure through governments. The most important activity the governments have to fulfill is to control the price – inflation rate – to have a balanced life. It is better that the governors make an effort to solve the problem related to air pollution by offering hybrid vehicles and best public transportation while it makes staff angry which it is one of the source of being stressful.
To conclusion, there are reasons people are most likely migrate to industrialized city that give them a chance of having a best life but some residents are not satisfaction about their lives because spending your life in an enormous city is perfect demanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76632302405 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63815934771 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.9581616576 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276873334514 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09075276977 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834346938897 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153224132903 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105839640759 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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