Nowadays,private car has become the major means of transportation for most of the people.There are lots of problem associated with this.One of the problem associated with the increasing number of private vehicle is illustrated below along with the solution in the next paragraph.
If the number of the private vehicle increases in the town as the measure means of transportation then there will be tremendous problem in the problem.First of all the traffic in the road will increase significantly due to which people going to their respective work will find difficulties in reaching in time.Whereas the number of accident in the country will rise due to the large number of the cars.The petrol price will rise dramatically because the government has to feed every vehicle in the country with equal priority.
Therefore the significant solution is to increase the number of public vehicle instead of the private vehicle for the transportation.If there are more public transportation then it can carry a lot people at a time without covering much area of the road as compared to the private vehicle.For example,If 20 workers wanted to go for work in the company and they all have their private car then we imagine the area covered by those car instead if there is a bus which can carry all 20 workers at a time for their work then we can see the difference made by the transportation in occupying the area.Similarly lots of things like petrol intake as well as less accident will be likely to occur.
In conclusion the priority on the public transportation should be give more in compared to the private vehicle.Limited facility and access should be provided to private car.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97864768683 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12212228666 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455516014235 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.254017265 49.4020404114 409% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 349.75 106.682146367 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227953479451 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141407992564 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478939788766 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141407992564 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478939788766 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.2 13.0946893788 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.79 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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