More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the causes of this? can you suggest some possible solutions?
A growing number of people state that a present-day job structure is the root of stress. The primary cause of this phenomenon is the employees’ nature of work to achieve the target, and the most viable solution is to conduct training programs based on skills development and time management.
In the current working lifestyle, employees are subjected to an emotional strain because they tend to work hard by day and night to attain maximum productivity in business. For example, in contemporary jobs like Telemarketing, a weekly and monthly increase in the amount of production should be shown. Consequently, staff would work relentlessly to achieve the highest percentage of sales, and so they are under severe physical and mental pressure such as depression, stress, anxiety, insomnia, and so on.
I think a long term solution to this predicament is to organize monthly meetings or education equip with aptitude development and time management skills coupled with some relaxation therapies like yoga or meditation every week. These would enable the employees to work efficiently, and they could be focused and finished their work without any form of delays or difficulties. For instance, a similar initiative in Japan resulted in a 52% decrease in people calling in sick to work because of mental fatigue and having a peaceful working atmosphere in Techno Parks. The training will help them to gain skills, and then relaxation techniques help everyone to withstand stresses and strains more easily.
In conclusion, modern work structure gives rise to a stressful condition because everyone is behind the target achievement to reach a cutting edge in their sector, however skills development and efficient planning drills combined with a physical education would be a better solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...s to conduct training programs based on skills development and time management. In ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34982332155 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95565243762 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1700103442 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.4 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16218746162 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589292505578 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258598251219 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947554759011 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411296923626 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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